Hi yer8291,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the beauty of just noticing the gorgeous things surround you every day. I appreciate everything in my world that makes me happy and excited. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.