Hi Linton,
This is a fantastic essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about the different ways children learn social rules. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. The essay is about how autistic children perceive and learn social rules. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.