First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
What I Liked
Great rhyming! It's not always easy rhyming one word six times without it sounding forced. You did great!
You managed to grasp my curiosity about where this person spends their daylight hours. I feel like this could be a riddle.
You followed the rules to the contest perfectly.
Suggestions to Consider
I have no suggestions
Final Thoughts
I can't help but wonder what the answer is.
Best of luck in the contest, Neva!
Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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