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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Review: Waterfall by Robert Edward Baker



The opinions contained in this review are subjective, with the intent to be honest and helpful.
Please take that which you find useful, and toss the rest with good cheer.



Title and Author: Waterfall by Robert Edward Baker

Plot::
Leah Clearwater is a werewolf. Her job is to help protect vampires and other werewolves. She saves a girl and finds out she is her soulmate.

Opening Sentence and Paragraph:
The opening pulls you into the story. There is immediate action. There is also just enough information to keep you reading to find out how it is going to end. The whole story is well structured with easy flow.

Characters Development:
Although there is not a lot of character description, such as looks, there is enough implied through the action and the dialogue for the reader to get a good idea of what type of people are being talked about.

Dialogue:
I had no problem following the dialogue. I always knew who was talking, which can sometimes be hard in a story.

Punctuation and Structure:
I found no problems with punctuation or structure. The author paid a lot of attention to details. There is a good amount of showing versus telling with is a hard trait to do.

Closing Statement
I enjoyed reading the story. Although I am not a big fan of vampires and werewolves the story made sense and held my interest. You show a lot of skill in your writing technique. Thank you for posing.

Starling


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