"From Beyond" 



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From Beyond by Purple Princess


Plot::
Michelina has lost her husband Cooper, several months earlier. She thinks she might be going crazy because she keeps seeing Cooper in her dreams and feels his presence sometimes.

Hook:
Michelina visits a medium.

Characters Development:
Michelina - widow looking for answers and valadation
Cooper - deceased husband
Judy - claraboiant
There is not a lot of character development. We know Michelina is distraught at the death of her husband. Judy is being presented as a reliable medium. Cooper is being presented as a visiting ghost.

Dialogue:
Minimal dialogue given. What is written though seems naturally spoken.

Punctuation and Structure:
Great joy on checking for Punctuation and story structure.
… Any crystal ball, gypsy need comma or tarot card reader
… which meant Cooper was here, standing behind me likeas she said.
… because just hearing the word play (one word)}/c} sent naughty thoughts

Closing Statement
I love the insert you added to show Cooper talking to Michelina in her sleep. This was interesting to read. My husband passed away about 20 years ago, and he still visits me in my dreams. Thank you for sharing.

Starling


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .