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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Elfin Dragon-finally published! I am reviewing this because I am part of "Merit Badges for Fun" Open in new Window.. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Great visuals of your kitten!
         *Bullet* Loved the first stanza. I could hear her paws a-pounding!
         *Bullet* she zooms past me - I love onomatopoeia! *Bigsmile*
         *Bullet* You were consistent with not capitalization and lack of punctuation, which worked well in this piece! Nice work!


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* No suggestions! Everything looks great!

My favorite lines:

always quiet yet
full of sound

(loved this!)


Final Thoughts

         I really enjoyed this piece. *Smile* Thank you for posting!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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