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What I Liked
Great visuals of your kitten!
Loved the first stanza. I could hear her paws a-pounding! she zooms past me - I love onomatopoeia!
You were consistent with not capitalization and lack of punctuation, which worked well in this piece! Nice work!
Suggestions to Consider
No suggestions! Everything looks great!
My favorite lines:
always quiet yet
full of sound
(loved this!)
Final Thoughts
I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for posting!
Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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