Hi Nyxira,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with sorrow and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone trying to let go of a painful past of abuse and neglect. I am hoping that the speaker is really willing to let go of the past as they claim. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 04/22/2021 @ 4:03pm EDT
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