Hi pirate king,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if X-Men and Psylocke can be saved. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a group of super heroes is in trouble and another group tries to find them and help them. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.