Hi Kitbok,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem speculates about what the world would be like if humans were never created by God. I am so grateful to God for my life and future that I have. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.