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 The Musket and the Sword.  Open in new Window. [13+]
based on Napoleon's invasion of Russia
by General PGT Beauregard Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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There are several places where you used of when i think you meant off. It is very full of dialog for a battle scene. Perhaps less talkie more fightie would help. Speeding up the pace of it might be good too. But i am nitpicking. I like the story even though historical fiction isn't one of my favorite genres.
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