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Given: Mar 20, 2021 at 12:44am
Length: 309 Characters |
309 w/o WritingML
There are several places where you used of when i think you meant off. It is very full of dialog for a battle scene. Perhaps less talkie more fightie would help. Speeding up the pace of it might be good too. But i am nitpicking. I like the story even though historical fiction isn't one of my favorite genres.
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