Hi Lucy,
These are fantastic lyrics. The tone is tinged with love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The lyrics are about a woman who fell in love with a man who took things slow. I hoped that this relationship would evolve and become even more loving and mutual. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved these lyrics. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the lyrics a wonderful rhythm. The meter was consistent from line to line. The lyrics flow extremely well. They are a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in these lyrics. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.