Hello A. P. Williams ,

Welcome to Writing.Com! You'll see Writing.Com affectionately abbreviated around here as WDC or WdC. I think it's a fantastic community and I hope you'll like it too. This review is meant to serve as a welcome to you from the "The WDC Angel Army" . I hope you find it encouraging. All opinions are my own.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and, unfortunately, can relate to the experience of having known a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde personality.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Your suggestion of the "adult" genre seems appropriate for this poem. I think you can add three genres so you might also consider a couple others (perhaps "relationship" and "experience"?) to increase your potential reader pool. Some people search by genre here for things to read.

Your poem reflects my understanding of the Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde phenomenon. It's astonishing how people can have such different sides of themselves and how well a Hyde can hide.

Your poem is easy to read, flows nicely and evoked clear images as I read it.

I liked how you structured your poem.

In the spirit of helpfulness, I do have a couple little suggestions for the description line of your poem. You currently have it written this way: "we have all dated one of these guys right?" I would just recommend capitalizing the first word and adding a comma. If you chose to do this, it would then look like this: "We have all dated one of these guys, right?" I think it reads better this way because we naturally pause before saying, "right." But, it's not necessary to make either of these changes, of course. Like any review advice, feel free to take it if it serves you and ignore it if it doesn't.

CONCLUSION:
You wrote an emotional relationship poem that I enjoyed.

Thank you for sharing your adult poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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