The Mystery of the Ocean [E] It was like an everlasting feeling Of an adventure of its deepest point. |
Hello Sharmelloween's Expressions I popped over to your port to see what I might review for you and this poem's title caught my eye, and decided to give it a read. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed your poem and all of the ocean, mystery and romance themes. You wrote a lovely nature/emotional poem that made me smile. MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: I liked the picture that accompanied your poem. It conveyed both the ocean theme and a bit of mystery. Your poem also contained a story, which made it extra interesting. Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked the images of moonlit romance by the sea as I read it. My favorite line was: "Waves coming ashore like heaven" because it just spoke to me. I loved it. I liked how you structured your poem. The four-line stanzas felt just right. CONCLUSION: You wrote a heartfelt poem that I enjoyed. Well done! Thank you for sharing your romantic nature poem with the writing.com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler *** WDC Angel Army Review *** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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