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Given: Feb 11, 2021 at 5:15pm
Length: 563 Characters |
563 w/o WritingML
I was the one that made this story idea suggestion and I am impressed with what you have done with it. I love the vivid imagery and the contrast between the total darkness and the main character's suit of light. He is a very strong character in my opinion. The heroine however seems pretty weak. In a short span of time she is willing to accept some impossible and disturbing things and leaps at the chance to join up with the hero. It makes her seem like a bubble head. I don't know what you can do to strengthen her character but she just isn't as well rounded.
You responded to this review 02/11/2021 @ 6:04pm EST
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