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A Bull Called Snowflake  [E]
A Poem For Cubby's Writing 4 Kids Contest December 2020
by ♥OctOGRE tHiNg♥
Review by Cubboo! (22!)
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Greetings, ♥OctOGRE tHiNg♥, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest .


*Pencil* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Boxcheckb* Visually appealing
*Boxcheckb* Easy to understand
*Boxcheckb* Followed the prompt & rules

*Crayons4* Plot / Internal Conflict / Goal: Snowflake Bull delivers the best gift anyone could ever have.

*Crayons7* Characters: Snowflake Bull

*Crayons* Dialogue: No, though he does moo Christmas carols. *Wink*

*Crayons3* Setting: Snowflake spreading the most cherished gift of all... love.

*Crayons5* Technicalities: None

*Crayons2* Favorites: First of all, I adore his name, Snowflake. *Snow1* And my second favorite part is the visual of him singing mooing Christmas carols to make the children grin and glow! *Heart* I think that warmed my heart the most. I also got a kick out of hooves of joy. *Bigsmile*

*Crayons8* Final thoughts: Of course the best gift of all is love. Great ending!

*Heart* Thank you for entering!!!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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