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Visually appealing Easy to understand Followed the prompt & rules
Plot / Internal Conflict / Goal: Snowflake Bull delivers the best gift anyone could ever have.
Characters: Snowflake Bull
Dialogue: No, though he does moo Christmas carols.
Setting: Snowflake spreading the most cherished gift of all... love.
Technicalities: None
Favorites: First of all, I adore his name, Snowflake. And my second favorite part is the visual of him singing mooing Christmas carols to make the children grin and glow! I think that warmed my heart the most. I also got a kick out of hooves of joy.
Final thoughts: Of course the best gift of all is love. Great ending!
Thank you for entering!!!
Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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