My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: This is a wonderful poem about your friend Jane!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the first and last stanzas. These stanzas reveal that your friend Jane is there.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because of the way your friend is there for you.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story about your friend in your poem.


Blessings, Sharmelle



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