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 |  | Turkeys' Revenge  [18+] Thanksgiving Guest of Honor  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" .  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. Visually appealing Easy to understandI love limericks! I wish I would've felt up to writing one this month and am so bummed out that I missed it! But such is life. Hopefully, there will be more limerick contests in the future, perhaps in March.  You've done a lovely job with this turkey-themed piece. I don't think I've ever read a Thanksgiving limerick before! Very catchy and creative!I especially liked your first two lines: I once was a young turkey named Tom, I was dressed for the Thanksgiving prom, They grabbed me right away! What a great hook.  I also almost chuckled out loud about the stinkbomb! Very humorous, Neva!Your rhyming was excellent! Although there may have been a bump in the flow in one or two places, all in all, this was very well done and especially entertaining! I expect you'll do well in the contest. Best of luck!Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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