that is truly creepy. zombie dog. i was not prepared for that. it leaves me with questions. where did the dog come from, how far has the zombification spread? You have a deliciously twisted mind. I love the way you build from an everyday situation to a decidedly dark and twisted direction.

However I would like to question your rating on it. Make sure that it is rated appropriately for the audience. And you might want to leave some kind of warning in the intro. Not everyone likes surprises like that. Not a critizisim just a suggestion.

Overall I loved the characterization and the story.