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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, ! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Random Reviews. *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Part elf and part dragon sounds intriguing!
         *Bullet* Lizal has a lot on her plate! Your story sounds like a page-turner. *Wink*
         *Bullet* I feel you've summarized your manuscript clearly.
         *Bullet* Your letter is not too long and wordy (which is good!) and sounds professional and to the point.


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I'm wondering if you should italicize Bio of an Elfin Dragon: Knowledge of Wisdom so it stands out to the literary agent.
         *Bullet* and her father leader of the clan of dragons Consider... and her father, leader of the Clan of Dragons


Final Thoughts

         I'm wishing you the best of luck!!! How exciting to be at this point! I really need to start sending out manuscripts again. You've inspired me!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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