Wow, Ruwth. What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing it with us. I can't believe that you used to be that sick because the Ruwth I speak to these days is one who is always helping others whether at the workplace or WDC Land. Overall, your testimonial is well-written, purposeful and focused on what you want to deliver. You don't waste words and tell other irrelevant stories or deviate, something that some non-fiction writers may do when telling their story. You explain well for your readers and kept them informed. Not everyone may know what parathyroid glands or hypoparathyroidism are. You explained in a very simple layman term and medical terms are one of the most difficult to explain, sometimes without excluding the jargons. Well done for that. Your testimonial is very well structured in terms of timeline. It's clear and we don't get lost. Even I make that mistake sometimes. You chose a suitable title for this testimonial too. It pretty much sums up how you came to ask yourself that question and I like how you shared that you asked this same question for a two different situations. I can see that you have painstakingly edited this piece. No outstanding grammar or typo issues just except a tiny little one: "Six months later, I put my walker..." God is good. Personally, I never ask that question to myself because I know God has a reason for everything, because He knows we can handle it (1 Cortinthians 10:13) and for some cases that He can show His goodness and demonstrate His miracle for others. It's also amazing how a church would fast and pray a week for you. God is so amazing!

Thank you for sharing this with us and Write On!

Elycia Lee ☮







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