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 |  | A Christmas To Remember  [E] Christmas is near, but Lisa has nothing to feel cheerful about. Then she meets a stranger  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Sum1's Home! I discovered this feel-good story on the Read & Review page.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  This is such a sweet story! Although I had a feeling of what was to come, it's nice to have it validated. Whew! I'm one of those who believe in good endings.  Good job! There were so many things about this holiday story that I loved. I got a kick out of Lisa telling Christopher he reminded her of the movie star from the Jurassic Park series, Sir Richard Attenborough, instead of Santa Claus.  And Santa... I mean Christopher, certainly got a kick out of it, too. Nice touch!Suggestions to Consider The only thing I really noticed were a few areas where commas should be, which is a minor technicality, of course.  Everything else looked great!Final Thoughts I enjoyed this feel-good piece very much! The little song/poem Christopher recited was special, too. Did you write that yourself? Now... if Santa could just make this virus disappear! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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