The Black Cat's Tale [E] A Locked Shop, A Tardy Shopkeeper, and Trinkets. |
Not a bad story with an interesting denouement leading into a fantasy realm. I also liked the way you used his Welsh name, and not the English version we are bombarded with. Now, I only review things at WdC I like, and so, with that in mind: Technically: *There are a few misused and missing pieces of punctuation. *There are a number of missing capital letters (especially in direct speech). *A few words are repeated close to one another, giving the writing an odd feel. Story-wise: *The tea-drinking was important, but it felt over-done. *The cat is called 'Tabby', then was "black". Or is this a different cat? It felt like the same one. But I did like the idea of awakening an old life, a past life into the present. It almost felt like a prologue, ready for something grander. Nicely done story. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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