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Flash-Fiction with the words "I can't believe you did that".
by mxnasi Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         Good morning, mxnasi Author Icon, and welcome to WdC.
         For the record, my real name is Jack Tyler, and I am a retired steampunk and horror writer who tries to review in a wide variety of styles and genres. While I have a few books in print, I am neither a famous author nor a renowned critic. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours. Hopefully my comments will give you some ideas to take your writing in directions you hadn't previously considered.
         Before I pitch in, allow me to offer a suggestion: Put a little of yourself into your bio sections. You will receive much more tailored reviews if your reviewer knows a little about your background and experience level.

         Okay, so flash fiction with a prompt usually means contest, and I hope you did well because this is a brilliant and surprising little tale told in very few words. The story is tiny, a little vignette of life with a size appropriate to flash fiction, the last sentence changes the story to something completely different, and all the "characters" play out as they should with no inconsistencies or jarring changes. The mechanics (spelling, grammar, punctuation) are error-free to the best that I can tell, though I'm hardly an English professor, and I can find nothing here to base a reduction in the rating on. Five stars it is.
         As I know nothing about you, age, gender, level of experience, or anything else, it's difficult to know how to summarize. I wish you success in your writing, and that it takes you wherever you wish to go with it. Depending on your age and experience level, you may find something to like in one of my blogs, and I cordially invite you to visit "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. or "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.. Whatever the case, this was a fun read with a surprise in the tail, and I thank you for sharing.

Read well and write better,
*Captainwheel* Jack

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