Hi Chained,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone whose world has fallen apart because they refused to be honest with themselves. I am hoping that the person in the poem can rebuild their life and be true to themselves from now on. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.