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Hello again, Lee!
I think I told you I'm no poetry expert, but I thought this was good. I've peeking at your poetry lately, and for some reason it 'calls' to me. Kind of freaky, eh? 'Course you've been writing since you were 18, so you it should call to someone, right? *Laugh*
Seriously though, I like spiritual pieces, and having seen my mother 6 months after she passed away, I do believe in spirits. This has a haunting undertone to it-I don't know if you meant for it to have one, but that's what I saw in it. But just a touch. The idea that we'll be able to see a lost friend or relative when we ourselves go to that great beyond is a nice reassurance, and you did a nice job showing that here.
Excellent rhyming and meter, and for as short as it is, it says all it needs to say.
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, and may your days be long and your nights be pleasant!

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