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Hello there, Betty G!
I'm no expert on poetry cuz I don't understand it most of the time, but I did understand this one! *Laugh* And for being as short as it is, I thought it was pretty good.
Yeah, it's simple (also probably why I could understand it! *Laugh*) and to the point, and it's loosely based on something that almost happened to you.
It's very true that love is blind and not everything is how it seems, and this is a good example!
Just glad you saw through this guy's façade before you headed of to Trinidad!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" Open in new Window. and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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