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Howdy, Not Suki!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this was really good! I love how you used those unique and odd terms, however nonsensical some of they might be ('a Peaceful, Analytical Phlegmatic'? Really? *Laugh*), and I also like how you brought it full circle for the most part with the simplicity of just being human and just your average dreamer.
Aren't we all? *Smile*
This reminds me of song from my favorite Rock N Roll band, AC/DC that I couldn't get out of my head when I was reading this!
*Music1* I'm a rocker
I'm a roller
I'm a right out of controller
I'm a wheeler
I'm a dealer
I'm a wicked woman stealer
I'm a bruiser
I'm a cruiser
I'm a rockin' rollin' man! *Music2*
Sorry. I just had to add that! *Bigsmile*
Well, now that we know who you are (and who you aren't, NOT SUKI *Rolling*)...
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