It is my pleasure to read your poem, Ghost Writer, and give you a review. Welcome to WDC!

Message: Cute poem, maybe a little on the dark side, but I smiled at the end. A talented spirit decides to put her spin on a horror story, along with her cat who kept her company. This puts a whole new spin on Ghost Writer, which this author aptly named her poem.

Narrative/Style: The narrative structure shows dramatic action, determined the key conflict - which this main character ignored with confidence.

The style is comedy.

Form/Flow/Tone/Mood: The form is free style, it seemed to be lyrical bordering on a limerick the way it flowed so smoothly when read out loud, along with a sense of humor.

The tone is contemplative, reflecting on an issue and putting it down on paper.

The mood is earnest, fanciful, and sharing inner feelings.

Imagery/Pace: The imagery - "All murky she sat,
with her palindrome pen" & "her Hallowe’en cat was asleep once again."

FAVORITE LINE:

When she’d written her prose,
and its vapours arose,
she danced (for the spirit was willing).

OPINION: There is nothing like patting yourself on the back for a job well done, or dance to show your joy.



Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Jeannie💕



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .