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| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC, George from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" and "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" ! I am happy to review from a reader's perspective. Wow! I was really engaged in your story and the title used in the last line totally fit!  It was easy to follow the well written narrative where you show the man's thinking clearly. The point of view and narrative voice was consistent and the plot was sound. You show his brilliant mind that you mention in the first line in an effective manner. The action and plan was described in detail and I could so feel the man's amusement at the end. Having him ask questions of himself along the way, illustrates his logical mind and gives me the idea he has spent too long dealing with criminals.  It is cool how you used the typical scenario of wife and best friend, and the revenge angle..and have the victim of the betrayal have his win. Usually they fail. I like the twist.I did wonder why the killer did not let on... and was willing to go to jail as well? So it was a bit confusing in the court where the loose end uncovered was finding the middleman? the hit man confessed but he was not the original guy contacted?  I wonder if she will begin an appeal now that she knows. His revelation was sweet to him but maybe not wise. LOL Thanks for sharing your craft here at WDC!  eyestar
 
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