\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4534074
Review #4534074
Viewing a review of: {citem:}
Review of  Open in new Window.
Review by eyestar~* Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: | (4.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC Lettucewilt from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window. and "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*


*Salute* Oh Wow! Good for you for jumping into a contest! I admire folks who can tell a whole story in 140 characters for Tweet Me a Story! *Thumbsup*

*Burstg* I enjoyed the references to Greek gods as I like myths! Your choice of God gives a wonderful picture of how the girl was during the argument! Brilliant.

*Burstr*You effectively gave the reader the characters, the past incident and an evocative image in two lines. I wonder if you need quotations in the last line, which seems like dialogue yet could be narrative...*Think*

*Star* Thanks for sharing your vision and craft. Good luck in the contest. I can really imagine Hephasestus! whew!

Image Protector
GROUP
WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group Open in new Window. (E)
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of eight Quills!
#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon

Sig for blog/reveiws

   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4534074