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Something in the cave made a noise
by Narshguy Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* I was drawn by the title that popped up on Random Reads and after I read the piece I could see how all the voices could be related. This was a very intriguing and originally woven piece of writing. It feels like all the voices in one's head meeting! LOL I think it is indeed a mystery item.

*Bursty* I think the setting of a cave where tones can echo is brilliant and some of your letters repeated mimic that spacial tone. It really comes across that these voices cannot see anything or each other.*Thumbsup* And that they are all concerned about this other noise. Spooky place!

*Burstr* The use of coloured font for different voices is helpful in the read, which could get quite confusing. *Wink* I could feel the aloneness of the first voice calling in the dark. Good use of space.

*Star* I am not sure what to say about the form...it is quite unusual. You leave me being curious at the end too. Just like the kin.

Thanks for sharing your cool vision at WDC.

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