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 Review #4522263 |
 | Poor Muppett  [13+] Flash Fiction 12/30 Contest Entry.  |
| (4.5)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hello there, Greg M! This is a pretty good, albeit sad, piece, and you did a nice job of telling it. I also like how you used the prompt phrase. I've done these 300 word FFs quite a bit, so I know how hard it is just to get a plot started, let alone a whole story with so few words to use. But you pulled this off quite well. What's odd about this is just the other night I had a similar escapade with a possum of my own (only the 3rd time I've ever seen a possum in my life!), and it was also in the middle of the night. Fortunately, it was too lazy to go after my neighbor's cats though. The spelling and grammar was flawless, and the whole piece read smoothly and naturally. Kee ponw ritin gon, Greg, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
PSS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page under Community on the left hand side. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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