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I Write In 2019 and 2024 to....  Open in new Window. [13+]
Lots of creative pursuits in 2019 and more in 2024 and beyond.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Raise A Glass To The Old Man" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. You posted before me, so here is my review.

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I like this. Christmas does tend to fill us with nostalgia (the old man) and the New year is shiny and new (the baby). As much as I love the old man and that whole time of year, I'm looking forward to a fresh start with 2020. I hope you have some awesome plans for the new year as well!


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"Ignored (comma) the old man slumps off into the alley"

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This is a 5. Great read and I wish you luck in the contest!

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