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Wheel of Fortune Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "December 24, 2019" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. You posted before me, so here is my review.

*FlowerP*My Impression*FlowerP*
I found this poem to be utterly lovely. I liked the realness of this poem, as I find a lot of art depicts Joseph, Mary, and baby Jesus as unbelievable superhuman saints, as in the old Christmas cards where they all had halos. This is a refreshing read.


*FlowerP*Suggestions*FlowerP*
No suggestions. I nontraditional, yet striking Christmas poem.


*FlowerP*Grammar/Punctuation/Usage*FlowerP*
I didn't notice anything here.

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This is a 5, for sure. I enjoyed reading it and good luck in the contest!

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