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 |  | Pretty Ugly Words  [18+] Poetry and prose for contests. The occasional "slider" poem.  |
| (5.0)  Happy Holidays Sugar cube! Way to go. you are almost done 52 weeks of fun!  I am happy to review your cool piece in the 'I Write in 2019" forum.wow! I am impressed with the composition. I am not familiar with this form so thanks for the notes. I imagine it took some effort to get this to flow coherently in message and rhyme format. It was fun to read and had a happy warm feeling to it that is suggestive of the season.The images of the Christmas activities were vivid and told in a lively tone. I love the word "glee".  You did a fabulous job with the rhyme scheme especially coming up with words that have to have the same endings. Whew! I liked "lends, descends" and "plea, glee, spree" as they fit the theme and help build the picture. Brilliant!"he' rhymes though it is a bit ungrammatical. LOL The poem creates a clear vision of the season and its reality...eg. the line about shopping not being free. LOL Yet that does not even ruin the high spirits! Thanks for sharing your gift and creating this challenging form.  Best wishes for the season and next decade.  
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