Hello ♥HOOves♥ ,

Congratulations on writing another great poem! This one was fun to read and I could relate on a bunch of different levels. The ending left me hanging but was definitely a funny twist I didn't see coming.

I enjoyed reading your creative contribution to the unique conundrum presented by the "Writer's Cramp" prompt you addressed with your poem.

I loved your phrase, "porch pirates" both for the alliteration and creative way of saying package stealer.

This line made me chuckle: "smart everything except me," as I could relate to the feeling . Your line, "~ at least it wasn't ticking...." made me smile and upped my curiosity.

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and evoked strong feelings in me as I read it.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

Your poem is so well written that I have no suggestions for improvement. (Though I would like to know what was in the package!)

Thank you for sharing your fun and funny suspenseful poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!

Happiest Holiday wishes to you, Mr. Hooves and Boo!
PWheeler





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