Hi Lucky Lady,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if speaker will find a way to find love and not be hurt in the process. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, a woman goes through two difficult marriages and a self-destructive life. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are fully developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either indent or double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.