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Review #4510460
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 Space  Open in new Window. [E]
A tale of anxiety
by Jin Ryan Author Icon
Review of Space  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jin,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone if filled with sorrow and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is caught between wanting the person they to be near them and telling them to go because the speaker is no good for them. I am hoping that the speaker can find a way to be with the person they love. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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