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 | Heart Aching Princess, Short Short Story  [E] Short Short story for the 10/18 flash fiction entries thingy. (297 words)  |
| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Greetings, Isaac! This isn't bad for flash fiction piece, and I like the concept of this princess finding somebody to help guide her as she prepares to take over her kingdom. But you didn't use the prompt phrase! The spelling and grammar were good, but you have to use the prompt phrase, which is "Nobody is home". In quotation marks. By the way, since you're new here, here's a hint about this contest: the owner/judge, Arakun the twisted raccoon, really likes twisted/surprise endings. You might want to keep that in mind if or when you enter this contest again!  Kee ponw ritin gon, Isaac, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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