Hi Halleigh,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and tinged with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your little sister who passed away when she was still just a baby. It is good that you can remember her with love and acceptance. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.