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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Balloonp*Hiya Kit! I found this piece on the "1 Write in 2019" forum. I see it was for the 24 ..er..19 syllable contest. I totally forgot it this week. LOL
Good for you for taking up that challenge.

*Balloong*The image you paint is so vivid and I like the 'Music' used as metaphor. Brilliant. The key word juxtapose is well illustrated and I could almost feel the change in movement and sound. Wow!

*Balloonr* I am wondering if the rule of adding the key word as part of the 19 syllables still applied? I know in the 24 syllable one we had to bold the word.
In any case the poem is pleasant to read aloud with some repeated sound letters like 's', "o" and "d". Wonderfully complete and concise poetic picture.

*Star*Thanks for sharing your vision and craft.

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