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The Gift of Laughter and Fun Open in new Window. [E]
A poem depicting the importance of fun in your life.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "The Gift of Laughter and Fun" Open in new Window. for "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window..

First thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

I like: T he last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with a lesson.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this poem a 5.0 because of the lesson.

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