Hi Stacey, welcome to WDC. I am reviewing your poem "The One Where You Love Yourself" 

Self-acceptance...

The words are living adrenaline for someone who has been drained of self-worth.
Like a syringe going through the veins of a soul who has been beaten down by words that are made like bullets by others who continually fire, fire, fire. then just when the soul is almost dead, when feelings have been drained from the veins, when hope has fused and the button of hopelessness has been pressed.

The words are released and flow like a river through the empty veins, new life, and strength filter through. this can only be God's intervention.

Your words could be a lifesaver to the soul of the battered dying souls who need a lifeline.

Loved it.

Don’t rely on someone else for your happiness and self-worth,
Only you can be responsible for that.
If you can’t love and respect yourself ,no one else will be able to make that happen.
Accept who you are ,completely- the good and the bad.
And make changes as YOU see fit, not because you think someone else wants you to be different.

Just a couple of commas, yourself, and on the next line are, you have put a space between those words.

That is all I can find but all good otherwise Stacey. Well done you.

Alexi