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  |  | I Write In 2019 and 2024 to....  [13+] Lots of creative pursuits in 2019 and more in 2024 and beyond.  |
| (4.5)| Hello there, I'm Mastiff, and I'll be taking a look at your work today. I have to be honest, I'm not a poet, don't know much about poetry, and the rules are much different than other writing. So take everything I say with a grain of salt, or a winter bag of it, knowing these are just my thoughts. I won't do much as far as technical corrections, unless I see something that really sticks out, because the rules are just so different. Thanks for sharing your writing! Why I chose it: Well, you posted before me in I write 2019, so it was kind of required.  I'm not a huge poetry reviewer, because I don't think I'm all that good at it. How it made me feel: It made me chuckle and smile. I believe some poetry is meant to do just that, and your did. It started amusingly, then summed things up well, not an easy task in so few lines. Points I thought you made: You kind of defined the structure to some extent, then explained what you thought you should do with it. I wouldn't have known completely without the full explanation, but I read that first anyway! Anything Technical: Nothing I could find. In fact, that's a handy reference, the syllable counter, so thank you for that! Final Thoughts: I'm not sure I've ever seen a poem that, well, describes the type of poetry being written. It's unusual, but I thought it was very cool! Thanks again, and happy writing! Mastiff 
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