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Review #4484575
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Prompted by Poet's Place Cafe  Open in new Window. [E]
Inspired by challenges at Poet's Place Cafe, a forum designed to hone your writing skills.
by Tinker Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Sunday Morning Form of the Week Insane Cinquain" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Flowerr* Hiya Tinker! I am happy to review your interesting entry in "I Write 2019."*Delight*


Wow! This is an impressive construction. I had not heard of it until I saw it at the Poet's Place and now here. The name is cool...insane cinquain! *Laugh* Thanks for the convenient link about how it works. I did check it out and your example reflects the forum correctly. *Thumbsup*

I enjoyed reading the poem aloud for its fine rhyme, flow and your choice of vocabulary that includes lovely alliteration, assonance and consonance. I like the theme and can so relate to the experience. The heavier sounding words in verse one gives a sense of not wanting to face the work, an effective contrast with the shorter softer words and image of the last verse. One can feel the comfort and coziness of the bedroom. *Thumbsup* The imagery is vivid.

I can appreciate the effort to create the contrasting images and follow the format. Wonderful crafting. *Star*

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