Well, I have to say Azrael Tseng this is a lovely tale told in a poetic style that captured me and held me through to the end.

I'm 💙 Carly- Hello 2025 and I have the pleasure of reading and reviewing your piece as it came before mine in the I Write In 2019 forum.
I am unsure of the poem's form... there is some rhyming to be had, but it does not seem to follow any particular pattern. I was too caught up in the tale of the poem to ready care too much about technique. I do wish you all the luck in the contest and I hope it surely does win because it is really quite beautiful in it's crafting.
I saw no grammar or spelling concerns.
A lovely request from a boy for his dying aunt.

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