Ah, poetry. I don't know a lot about it, which is evident in the poetry I've attempted , but I enjoy rhyming poetry. You get into a rhythm and everything reads so smoothly.

A place of darkness, someplace none of us wish to be. You've portrayed it well. It reminds me of being in a deep depression trying to free yourself. It made my heart feel heavy. Ultimately, prayer helps to break free.

Then, finally, a sliver of hope ensues. It's like a huge weight being lifted. Then thank Him for his grace.

I like your poem. As always, an excellent job.