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The Teacher's Piano Open in new Window. [18+]
Written for the Paranormal Romance Contest
by IceSkatingSugarCube Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi, IceSkatingSugarCube Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "The Teacher's Piano" Open in new Window. for "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window..

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with old ghosts not fussing over time. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

I like: I like this simile, fingers danced like nimble ballerinas across the ivories, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the suggestion that true love is eternal.

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