I saw your story on the I write forum and am glad I did. I was immediately drawn in and interested in the story. I'm NOT at all a Sci-Fi fan and I loved the story, which is definitely saying something. Normally, I'd be bored to death reading Sci-Fi and that wasn't the case at all. I was interested and wanting to know more about their language and all about this other life. My favorite part was their language and the way you found a way for them to communicate and learn a common form of communication through the tablet. The ending where he pointed to rain for his tears was a huge improvement and a great ending too. I was a small but exciting twist when he fell into the cavern area. It left me wondering. I figured the other life would be down there so that part wasn't at all surprising but it's okay, I still enjoyed it. Great job, good story. Good luck in your contest!!!

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