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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


Lorraine,

I like the prompt used for this 24 Syllable poem. I just reviewed one writer who was embarking on the jagged path of writing poetic perfection while you are embarking on a new day.

Your poems are different and I like them both. Being constrained only by the use of the prompt and the limit on the number of syllables almost challenges each person to display unique poetic form, doesn't it?

You have chosen a good cover for your poem. It enhances your simple title "A New Day" and your Brief Description follows suit.

I like how you open with "Golden rays" and close with "sunny day" because they seem to me to be a reflection of each other.

I don't know if that was intentional or just the way your muse led you but it works for me.

Your poem makes me want to embark on a new day!




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